Write Gaslamp Fantasy the Victorians Would Believe

Who inherits when your heroine's father dies without a son? What does it cost her to leave her husband? What happens to a body found in the street at two in the morning? Your reader will not know the answers either. They will know when you have guessed. It arrives as a one-star review saying the book felt off, written by someone who cannot say why. Write Gaslamp Fantasy the Victorians Would Believ...